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Old 04-30-2008, 09:38 PM
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This is my start for 2008. I actually started it a couple months ago, then left it alone for a while. It's too wordy, so if any English Profs are out there, please help me edit so it's readable in less than a week. It's not done, so suggestions are welcome. Thanks!

The Halloween bash has become an annual affair,
You and a friend are invited, if you dare.
One thing of which you should take and be aware,
Those attending should be ready for a frightful scare.

The evening will bring a dire situation to light,
That may cause those with weak constitutions to take flight.
Many involved will be in too deep before they learn of their plight
And will receive their deserved reward; a heart-stopping fright.

You know the time is drawing near when the jack-o-lanterns start to glow,
And the ghouls and goblins that have been resting a year are ready to go.
We are sure to enjoy the antics of those brave enough to show,
When the provided mixed libations start to flow.
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